JAMPI : ORIGIN (FILE 02)

nice story line and also bring me on to feeling as like all the characters and for sure should create suspense and more darkest horror stories... but for all I really like to say this is awesome... try much more to put something different in your writing element to combine it with base of mystical, horror or something like else but it just my suggestion as a reader but not your fan's personally... don't stop to write and never ever give up BrO... experience is the most of great teacher you have to learn more about and try refer to others who's a "Otai yg primitif, karya cetusan idealism aktif, kerangka konsep pemikir kreatif, tampilan hasilnya mahakarya 'darknestlistic horrorealisme aggresifniac." or "sang pena emas" and "old

Nice.. Harapnya akan ada sambungan lagi..

Siri ke 2 dan cerita2 nya masih konsisten. Geruda memang budak gen Alpha yang tak makan saman.